日本研究生入学申请英文求鉴定

[我想写一篇关于申请奖学金的申请信英文版的谁可以帮帮我啊]Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for admission to your university to pursue my M.S. degree. I have read the annual prospectus issued by your university...+阅读

我全部看了下，给你我修改的参考一下啊，你再好好看看~ Dear Prof: After carefully reading your article published on the magazine XXXXX,I searched some similliar articles,I noticed（直接说 noticing吧） your thinking and your device is（用are 并列主语） more advanced than others. My major is XXX,it has a deep relation with XXXX,however(but好些)，our school,even our country,have no such（应为doesn't have such a） advanced device（你想表达什么？仪器？设施？再想下吧），more inportant thing is（改为what's more）,we havo no a such （应为don't have such 环境不可数吧） Professional research environment,so,as my teacher expected,I plan to go abroad,aim to get(aiming at getting) advanced information (development好些吧) and skills. It is obvious that your lab is my best choice.First, your country have a（去掉） professional environment,there are many kinds of recource,so many articles,reports could give me inspiration whenver I need(there are many kinds of recource and a large number of articles,reports that could give me inspiration whenever I need). Second,why you（什么意思……）？generouly speaking,in japan,there are many famous universities,and also many famous professors（太多there are 了，是不是改为 the famous universities and professors in Japan will really help me a lot ）,after I carefully analysis（不是被动，正常应该是analysis carefully，不过应该不要紧），I found that your lab have(has) a long history and the reseach(research吧) direction fits me very well,I believe all that can help me researching and discovering this major fluently（混乱也……我按照我的理解修改下I believe those can help me learn my major smoothly）. There are so many reasons that I am eager to be your student,(i am looking forward to being your student )I really hope you can accept me,thank you! sincerely XXX XX/XX/2009