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Report on changes in wheat production and prices for a European countryThe aim of this report is to summarise the changes in wheat production and prices for a European country between 1990 and 2000.In term of the wheat production , the volume of production was on an upward trend. The figure started at 800 tonnes in 1990 and then increased to 1300 tonnes in 1995, with a surge of 2200 tonnes in 2000.In view of the average price of wheat, the figure was fluctuating a lot during this period. It was rated 1400 per tonne in 1990 and rocked to 2800 per tonne in 1995 before it decreased to 2200 per tonne in 2000.In conclusion, between 1990 and 2000, the quantity in wheat production showed a steadily growing trend while the price of wheat was quite fluctuating....
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