我马上要参加考研复试了自己写了一篇英语自我说明请英语水平高

[考研复试英语自我介绍]Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is Wangzhaokuan, twenty-five years old. I e from Xing Tai city of...+阅读

我马上要参加考研复试了自己写了一篇英语自我说明请英语水平高

个人意见，只做报考。1.为什么叫Lili..用中文名好点吧。2.那句after graduation...感觉好怪，前边说过的，就说after that，然后继续说。3.in the first 7years，听着别扭，把时间放在后边i ......for 7 years. 4.i went to be working。。为什么用这种时态，用过去时就可以了吧. i worked in....。 4.any chance的any 改成every你这是肯定句，用every.5.chance for self-improvement.我不肯定用for做介词对不对，不过用to improve myself.肯定比你那句容易懂。这是口语，不是写文章，以容易听懂为好。个人意见

考研复试英语自我说明

Good afternoon (morning), professors: It is my great pleasure to be here. My name is mingmingzhou , graduated from Computer Science Department of Wuhan University.During my four-year study in the university as an under-graduate student, I have built up a solid foundation of professional knowledge, as well as a rich experience of social activities. I am a determined person, always willing to achieve higher goals. What's more, I am good at analysis, with a strong sense of cooperation. All of these led me to the success of passing the first round of the entrance examination to the Master's degree. Personally, I am very humorous and easy-going, enjoying a good relationship among my classmates. In my spare time, I like to read books regarding how to be myself and how to deal with problems. Music and movies are my favorite entertainments. As for my sport interest, I could not deny my greatest interest is football. Playing this game brings me a lot of glory, happiness and passion. All in all, Wuhan University, with a highly qualified faculty and strong academic environment is the university I have long admired. I believe that I am a very qualified applicant for admission into your Master of IT program and can contribute to the enrichment or diversity of your university. THANK YOU FOR YOUR ATTENTION!

研究生面试英语自我说明已完成求修改！采用者另加50分！

Hope you will be successful第六行：most my time改为most of my time，紧接着＂ But I also used vacation time to some decorating companies doing internships。紧接着过去式应改为现在完成式：I have tried to……总体还不错.＂改为But I also interned during vocation in some decorating companies.倒数第四行”sense any change“最好改为seize any chances。Good luck to you...