[雅思作文怎么修改]额。。。。我被下面那个回答给深深的。。。雷动了。。。 淘宝给钱是一个方法啦。。 但是我觉得最主要的是，学会写作的思考方法和句子结构以及用词的修正，自己先不断地改进是重...+阅读

巧， the percentage of~~~~~很少用take on吧，或者我没学过；tends to decline"..！！哈哈~~＂While with age grow up the percentage of carrer takes on decline trend;percentage of carrer"！！.直接用＂begins/..除非你前面有交待！！，the percentage of interest take on increase trend；不是". ＂不是很好噢.用However；，没有图的人不明白，as age grows up，但貌似这个就是第一段了？？，我第二次考雅思前，只写过2个作文，这个就是其一...

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雅思小作文开头展开全部 这里有一些我以前考雅思时收集的小作文开头句子的模版~~~ 希望对你有帮助 1 according to the chart``` 2 the date lead us to the conclusion that``` 3 the dat...

雅思小作文开头段应该如何写以下四种方法可以成功改写雅思小作文一切开头段，但要注意的是并不是所有的方法可以同时使用，要培养考生自身的灵活性，根据所需来运用技法。 一篇文章，开头段非常重要，古话说：好的...

求！剑桥雅思真题4作文答案这是剑桥4的第二套S2，范文如下： Happiness is very difficult to define,because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness...

剑桥雅思全真试题4第一篇小作文范文The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999. On average, 11% of all households, comprising almo...

雅思作文修改小作文The two bar charts indicate the reasons for students'study among five age groups and the amount of supports received from their employers.According to the data,...

求剑桥雅思3 text 3的小作文书后范文急！谢谢！剑桥真题里就有考官范文，在model and sample answers for writing tasks目录下。如果需要剑桥雅思1-8的真题pdf 留个邮箱 我发给你 The data shows the differences between...

雅思小作文修改有语法错误，不过条理还算清晰。1.我觉得“without remarkable change.Compared with male counterparts，”这里compared前面应该改为逗号，这样句子更连贯一些，虽然之前的一句已...

请帮忙修改一下这个雅思G类小作文感谢信Dear Sue,I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for assisting me to be prepared for my new terms.(term)As you know, the city of Ottawa, which I will s...

求剑桥雅思3 text 3的小作文书后范文急谢谢剑桥真题里就有考官范文，在model and sample answers for writing tasks目录下。如果需要剑桥雅思1-8的真题pdf 留个邮箱 我发给你 The data shows the differences between...