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the First Day at Work

In order to have a better understanding of the society,I got a part time job at a restaurant in my summer holidays.I worked as a waiter there.The boss of the restaurant was very friendly.He gave me a suit of uniform and said,“Come to work tomorrow.”I nodded and then went home.Early in the morning of the next day,I rose and got dressed quickly,and then went to work without having breakfast.I told myself that that was my first day to work,so I must not be late.Luckily,I arrived at the restaurant 10 minutes early.“Good boy.”Said the boss.I smiled and began to work.At lunch time there were many people having meals at the restaurant.I was very busy,having the guests orders and treating them with the dishes.I was carrying a dish when suddenly I fell over.I broke the dish and hurt my finger.It hurt a lot.“It's nothing.”Said the boss,coming over to me,“Just go to see the doctor.I'll have someone do the cleaning.”

This was my first time at work.I felt very happy though I didn't behave well.

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