[关于我的老师的英语作文]以前写的 希望能帮到你 In my opinion,a good teaher should not only be good at teaching. but also be ready for helping students. Miss Huang,my English teacher is...+阅读
说实话吧，我觉得最多得3分。
自始至终，我没有看到明确的“为什么不能通过提价来保护能源”，你总是在打擦边球，绕来绕去的，不切题。
第一段的那个举例我看不出来如何与你的论点联系。第二段的解释一是不够详细，二是我不知道该如何理解你的这句话People may refuse to pay for the gasoline and electricity so that the electricity and gasoline may be used fro the people but can't earn any money back which will make the loss of the electricity and gasoline growing more.
还有一些小的语法拼写错误，单复数啊什么的你自己再查查看。。
我想说的是，TOEFL作文要的高分其实不难。你记住两条就可以了。一是切题，二是specific.就是185道基本每道后面都跟有的那句要求。
其实你这道题目完全可以这么分析；
不可以通过提价来保护能源
1。用得起电和车的人都是有钱人，提价对他们来说影响不大；他们甚至有可能飙着用来show身份地位，show他们有钱
2。对那些没有钱的普通百姓来说，提价对他们来说可谓是disaster，扰乱正常生活
3。其实有其他办法啊，比如倡导人们拼车（carpool），节约啊，等等的。
祝你好运！：）
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