On Excessive Packaging 过度包装

首先，给出你的观点，such as ＂ I do not advocate it.＂ ＂ I contend excessive packaging is a wrong way to promote the product.＂

然后，分几点详细写出论据。1.It raises the unnecessary cost. And the consumers need to pay more. 2. It uses too much materials and wastes resources. 3. Too much emphasis on the packaging while less focus on the quality of the product. .....等等。

最后，得出结论。Excessive packaging is a waste of money and resources and needs to be controlled.

大概框架如此，具体观点你也可以自己总结。过度包装的弊端是很明显的。希望可以帮到你整理出清楚的思路！望采纳。