开头:I'd like to talk with you about sth.
结尾:Your prompt reply will be appreciated./Thanks very much for your help.
如果要加点问候,how are you?hope you everyting is well.Good wishes to you! 这些就可以了。
我以前就是做这方面工作的,这些话不要太多,简单口语些。
当然,如果你跟对方很熟的话,也可以拉拉家常。比如上次我到你们公司去了之后很开心,你们公司服务很好,环境也很漂亮,XXX什么都可以说。
拉完家常后,一定要记得跟人家说,我写这封信的目的是为了跟你说I'd like to talk with you about sth.