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[英语四级论述类作文题目]（一）Fire Prevention on Campus 1. 前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失 2. 分析火灾发生的原因 3. 作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生 ●审题概述●？这是一篇分析火灾原因和...+阅读

1.It become a more and more common phenomena that a man's job has nothing to do with his major nowadays.

2.It doesn't seem unacceptable that someone who major in english education works as a translation or a man major in physics plans to be a businessman.

3.it is confused us that the relationship between the major and the work改为It confuses us that the major's unassorting with the work.

4.＂I think there have two ＂because＂(there are)（最好别用two because这种说法）

5. because the population of the colleage graduates are raising every year(population能这么用？用 the number of)

6.it's more and more diffcult for them to find a good job(Finding a job is relatively hard ,not to say finding a job that pays well and at the same time connects with what you learn.)

7.no matter what is the job about(no matter what the job would be they would chase for that.)

8. the mayjor they study is not they real want(the major they stduy is not the one they really expect.)

9.Just because they want to be a colleage student or they were just unaccperted by the other department,they stay at the department they had.In that case ,they of couse have not interesting in it ,when they graduate, they don't want to work with it. (They choose a college rather than a major,or they were rejected out of the doors of other departments,so they just have to choose a some certain field.

In that case they,of course,have no interest in what they learn.)

10. works工作不可数work，或practise.learn改用gain较好。

11.it is the same way like killing.....that.....

12.I can servring for others(serve)

13.The most important thing is that I can work happily

希望对你有帮助。