[托福作文题给个思路就行]Agree:keep you from friends and family.For example,I had a friend who always stayed in front of a television.He spent most of his time watching tv and finally h...+阅读

整体感觉段落很清晰，不足就是一些小的语法错误，这些你自己都能找到的。还有就是Even though we do get a couple of advantageous points from rookies, I maintain that experienced definitely provides people with more notable, more significant and more proper profits.这句话建议你放在结尾，因为第四段你是在写非选方的优点，这句话放这里不免有些霸道和自相矛盾，而放在结尾则说明了选方到底怎么比飞选方好，好在哪里。还有就是感觉语言地道程度一般，而且第三段说服力不是很强，例子很好，但一定要在例子之后说明例子怎么了，为什么支持你的论点，说明什么之类的，要延伸总体感觉问题就是说服力一般，但是20+的分数肯定没问题...

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托福英语作文题 future career急求文章100至150Future careers for each one of us vary greatly. Some people may be ambitious and aim to be a company director, some may just want a comfortable life. Some peopl...

新托福作文一道题这种题目属于你选择了观点之后，就要去论证它~ 时间有限~简要地说说我的思路~ I agreee with the statement that nowadays people are putting too much emphasis on appeara...

托福作文不想GRE那样把题库给出来那么平时该怎样练习才能尽可能我觉得准备issue可以多查查wikipedia，一定直接查英文版的。我自己准备时感觉那个很管用，虽然比较费时间。不但可以找到很多人物生平啥的来丰富自己作文内容，还可以顺便学学用词...

gre issue和托福作文的区别关于gre issue 和托福作文的区别的问题简单回答一下，希望可以帮助到你。 Issue和独立写作之间的异同 1. 题目内容 从题目涉及的内容上来看，两者有着比较大的不同。Issue涉及面...

新托福写作部分与GRE GMAT IRLTS的写作部分有哪些本质不同A）与GRE,GMAT, IRLTS作文相比，新托福作文题目理解难度看来是偏低的。举一个例子：【新托福考题】Do you agree or disagree the following statement:Schools should not pay mu...

托福作文求高手帮忙批改topic: what is the main role of （加a） university professor, to educate students or to do research?People may not appreciate a university professor who spends much...

高分求改托福作文估计分数同不同意Always telling the truth is草草看了下16-18句型变化太少从句过于复杂难懂结构衔接不流畅（从来没说诚实好。。。）结尾总结不够有力。。。总之很中国化，或。。。很模板化。。。题中有2个关键词是＂always＂和＂an...

TOEFL作文求批改我天天都在改托福作文。帮你看一下哈。 语法方面：pay more attention on their mood应该是to their mood Life abounds with the examples去掉定冠词 was delighted in the j...

求批改托福作文A persons job has more effects on his or her总体来说，这是一篇不错的toefl作文，两个理由都比较充分。第四段是想写让步段吧，不过这个段落没写出说服力，在考试的时候建议不写，toefl考试作文其实只要给出观点，写出支持观点的两...