写英语作文的诀窍

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写作是本人的老本行！！六级作文115，我的英语老师多次在班上向同学推介我的作文，我的作文没有语法错误，有很多高级词汇。在这里跟阁下分享下吧对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ;handsome;massive,innumerable,a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。

我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如： 1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health! 2.In my opinion,the driver's carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成虎厂港断蕃登歌券攻猾 3For my part,the driver's negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident 4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously！ ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子。

英语作文说明文

望采纳，谢谢.

With the development of science, human life has changed tremendously.People living in the 18th or 19th centuries would never imagine the advanced household appliances we are now able to enjoy.Every aspect of our lives, for instance, in the field of medicine or agriculture, has witnessed the great improvement through the application of science.

随着科学的发展，人类的生活发生了巨大的变化.18世纪和19世纪的人无法想像我们现在所享用的家用器具.我们生活的各个方面，比如医药、农业，都经历了科学所带来的改善.

However, many people complain that science has also brought disasters to human life.Some evil scientists have used their knowledge to do some illegal things.They may use science for the creation of weapons to destroy thousands of lives in wars; they might also use their knowledge to produce drugs to make a lot of money for themselves.

然而，也有人抱怨科学带给人类许多灾难.有些邪恶的科学家利用他们的知识做一些非法之事.他们用科学知识制造武器在战争中摧毁成千上百的生命；他们用其知识制造毒品赚取钱财.

Generally speaking, science has provided us with many valuable things.But if used wrongly, it can also lead to harm.We should try to keep science under our control and put it to the best use for mankind.

总的说来，科学为我们带来许多有价值的东西.但是一旦被错误地使用，它也能导致伤害.我们应该使之置于我们控制之下，使其为人类发挥出最大作用.

写英语作文说明文

nowadays,with the booming of high technologies, robots designed for home use have been enjoyging greater popularity among families around the world! The iRobiQ robot invented by the Korean robot company Yujin is alomost omnipotent. Not only can it control other robots, enabling them to clean floor, but it is able to help children learn english.it displays the words on its chest monitor after speaking out a word. now, i am looking forward to a better future where technologies are advanced enough, making it possible for us to build versatile robots and making our life more convenient!