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[雅思作文求修改求评分]文章写得很不错,除了一些小错误。it is believed that there is an inevitable trend that people,ranging from (加the) wealthy to the poor,are more likely to suffer from...+阅读

虽然是初夏的午后,却也是蝉声如织。坐在教室里,眼睛却漫不经心的瞥向窗外:低年级的学弟学妹们正在一遍一遍的练习着广播体操,虽然有些许的厌烦,却也很认真。看着一个个跳跃的身影变得越来越模糊,回忆开始以排山倒海之势向我涌来:这不正是当年的我们么? “都给我听好了!”体育老师正色到,"学校下周有个大课间活动,你们必须参加。到时候你们是主角,镜头会记录下你们的每一个动作,所以,从现在开始练习,直到我满意为止!"于是,就这样,在烈日炎炎下,我们就一遍又一遍的练习着。老师则虎视眈眈的巡视着,不厌其烦的纠正着。直到我们都精疲力竭的时候,老师才恨铁不成钢的说了一句:"原地休息两分钟!"不知怎的,老师让我们做操的两分钟总是特别的漫长,而休息的两分钟确实度分如秒。短暂的休息后,我们又开始了紧张而有序的练习。平日里的45分钟在今天却像是过了一个世纪那么久。终于,下课的铃声飘荡在了学校上空。大家感慨:终于等到你,还好我没放弃………然而我们的兴奋,等来的却是老师的一句:"下来个我认真地练习!"我们以为老师只是随便说说,所以都没在意。...

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